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Harmony by CrunchNugget Harmony by CrunchNugget
So I finally finished something for this story. And it only took half a year!

Not even joking about that. This origin story idea has been in my mind (originally intended to be a fan fiction) pretty much unchanged since way back in May, so a few details are possibly slightly outdated. If you care at all about why it took me so long, or my extra thoughts on this thing look at this journal entry, because I don't want this description to become as long as the picture itself. I hope this comic is clear enough for people to understand my story from the picture alone, but there are also a lot of details I would have included in the written version that couldn't really make it into the comic form, even as large as this is.

I actually finished an earlier version of this more than a week ago. In that one, I used dialogue instead of narration, but I felt like it just wasn't working. The story was too condensed, so the dialogue felt forced. So now I have this slightly odd alternative, and I realize it looks a little awkward in a few places how the ponies are all just standing there. So keep in mind that they are conversing, just that anything they would have said in such a small space would have been pretty redundant to the narration, so I felt it was better to leave it out entirely and let their interactions be somewhat vague. At least that way I didn't have to worry about using Ye Olde Ponyish due to the Nightmare Night episode.

I don't think I could ever be completely satisfied with this, and there are still things that bother me about it, but it's a lot better than the other version, in my opinion. Bleh, though, this thing has been molding in my head for so long, I can't even tell anymore if the ideas I wanted to express came through at all. I really hope this thing makes sense and everything...I keep bouncing back and forth trying to decide if I mostly like how this turned out or not.

Last thing I want to mention here is about Luna and Celestia's friends. That was the one aspect of this project that most had me procrastinating and waffling around. I honestly wish I could have done this story without having to define them at all. I felt like the whole point of those characters is that everyone has friends and other loved ones who matter to them personally, but to others a few steps away they become an unknown piece of the collective whole. Who Luna and Celestia's long-ago friends may have been is important to them, but to an audience it's enough to simply have the idea of their friends, with their individual identities unknown. I had to portray them somehow, though, but didn't want to just make up a bunch of random OCs. So, the character designs of their friends are...complicated. I'll leave it at that for the moment. If you don't like how they look, just think of them as placeholders for ponies we don't know.

So, was it worth all the effort and time spent trying to figure out what to do with this idea? Hard to say...this is the sort of thing that makes me feel kinda nervous in a way I don't get from just a silly random joke picture. Probably should have just stuck with writing it instead of comic form. In any case, I don't think I'll be doing something this complicated again.

[November 24] Thanks muchly for all the positive feedback, all. It feels good to see my little story received so well, and I'm starting to feel like I should remove that paragraph about wondering whether this was worthwhile. So I really appreciate all the comments, even if I don't reply to each of them.
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ilovemyfavoritegames Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
wonderful
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CrunchNugget Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015
I've been trying to think of a better reply than just a simple thank you, but I can't seem to, sooo...thank you.
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ilovemyfavoritegames Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
hehe you're welcome =]
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FeatherMC Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This is absolutely beautiful i brightened  up my day 
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CrunchNugget Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014
Thanks muchly. I'm glad it can still get that sort of reaction three years later.
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DerpTheTeletubbie Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
??????Confused 
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CrunchNugget Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
Eh, it would have made much more sense as a fic, but I was incapable of writing any dialogue, so I tried to condense it as much as possible into comic form. And because of that, there would have been WAY too much text if I'd made the characters actually speak, so I tried to make some vague narration and let the images otherwise hopefully speak for themselves. Plus it was based entirely on season 1, so it's pretty much incompatible with the show's canon now. Honestly, I always felt like this was grossly inadequate for the story I wanted to tell, but it was the best I could manage.

Trying to be as brief as I can, basically, it was supposed to be an origin story for a bunch of stuff: cutie marks, the Elements of Harmony, how Celestia and Luna become alicorns, and why ponies need to control their sun and moon (and possibly something I'm forgetting, because this is 2 1/2 years old now). I was drawing on a few specific scenes from the show, "Everypony everywhere has a special connection with her friends," and the way Celestia looked at her cutie mark after reading the letter that said "Sometimes, the thing you think will cause you to lose friends and feel left out can actually be the thing that helps you make your closest friends and realize how special you are." Also, a little bit from how Pinkie said a party was "how Equestria was made." So I thought that maybe the reason ponies control their sun is because it's not actually a star, but a giant ball of magic that ponies created when their planet's original star died (even if a star simply burning out harmlessly isn't all that realistic). I figured a spell that big was too much for one pony, so it would have to draw a little bit of magic from all of them, and if ponies all have a magical connection to everyone they care about, and each of them have other ponies they care about as well, that would link their entire species together in one gigantic web. And because it seemed to me that the Elements of Harmony act like a magical magnifying glass to focus magic more than actually create any itself, and considering how powerful they already are from just six ponies, imagine what they could do if they drew magic from all the ponies in the world. So Luna and Celestia activate a spell that permanently links all ponies everywhere together to create a new sun and moon, and turning themselves into alicorns in the process. And from that day forward, each pony gains a cutie mark to represent their own place in helping to sustain the life of their world.

Kinda hard to squeeze all of that into a comic, so hopefully that's less confusing.
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MiG111 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
It's an interesting story and I appreciated it more after reading the journal entry. :)
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FlameRays Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
What on earth?
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BarryFromMars Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks again. (I commented as "TheMoleIntheMinistry" Over a year ago.)
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CrunchNugget Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
I'm glad it made enough of an impression for you to still think of it after so long.
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BarryFromMars Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
It tells a message worth remembering.
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Sky-Dragoon-Twilight Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is Super Ultra Extreme Awesomazing!
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PonyUniverse Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This. Is.



Beautiful.
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CrunchNugget Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
Thanks, I'm glad it went over well. I'm also glad that season two canon didn't contradict it severely enough to render it totally irrelevant.
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PonyUniverse Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you welcome :D
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WheelJackson Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012   General Artist
See Pinkie, THIS is how Equestria was made! =P
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Pirill-Poveniy Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
This is beautiful, I appreciate the work put into it, and think that you did an excelent job with the placeholder ponies to convey the message. There's really not much more to say about this - technically I can't find any issue, your work is crisp and the pony designs fit really well in the world of MLP, so a hat tip to you for the great work. :)
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CrunchNugget Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
Thank you. I admit I was a little nervous about how people would respond to all the random (technically) OCs in this. Seems like I didn't need to be, though.
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pidopay Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
So, eh... Why is there no cutie marks in this story?
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CrunchNugget Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012
Well, it was intended to be an origin story for quite a few things, cutie marks being one of them. Since a cutie mark's purpose is to show a pony's unique place in the world, I figured it would make total sense for them to have first appeared during a burst of magic that bound the entire world together.

There's actually one panel near the end where they all have flashes of light over them showing that they're all getting their marks right then as a result of that spell, because cutie marks didn't exist until that moment. After that panel, there's only one more with characters in it, and they're all facing away, making Luna's the only one partially visible.

That was probably more explanation than you wanted, huh?
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pidopay Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
No, that was a very good explanation. Only though I think the cutie marks should be visible on the last panel... If you look at their flanks then maybe you can see what I mean... If, for example, applejack stood there her cutie mark would have been visible.
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CrunchNugget Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
Hmm... that's sort of a tough call. When they face directly away from the "camera" in the show, their marks aren't visible, but then I also angled them very slightly here, so it's hard to say. Here is the closest screenshot comparison I can find. Are my characters more angled than that? I'm not entirely sure, so it probably coulda gone either way, really.
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pidopay Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Hm.. Okay then ^^
All my questions are anwered =P
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beirirangu Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i'm comfused... they wern't alicorns before this... i have no idea what's going on anymore... i get the point you're trying to get across, but i'm still confused
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CrunchNugget Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012
Yeah, I realize it's a little vague. The journal entry I linked at the top of the description might explain it better, if you want to take the time to read a longish description.

As for Luna and Celestia...well, they had to come from somewhere, so I like to think they started as regular ponies.
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Iuphome Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is fiction but its still true.
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ChiantiArts Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I guess that happened after all unicorns, pegasi, and earth ponies found Equestria.
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SomeKindaSpy Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2011
Not true. If you remember the end of that episode, the flag that was erected was of Celestia and Luna. Therefore, it is only logical to assume that the two sisters defeated Discord BEFORE Equestria, as a country, was founded.
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ZaGreatLlama Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011
that was awesome
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PIcaRDMPC Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
That was beautiful.
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Mayleebell24 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I LOVE THIS SOOO MUCH I WANNA READ IT FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Khuur Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011
That's a nifty origin story (had to read the journal post to understand everything). It's rather . . . abstract, but I like it.
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Khuur Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011
Oh! And the comic is wonderful, too. It really sets the stage (and the motion for a narration over dialogue definitely improves that quality). Thanks for not giving up on it!
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HeartinaThePony Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is beautiful :)
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fluttershycute Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Student Artist
i love it!
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Bronyriffic Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
This is indeed beautiful, it has a great message to behold in it, it looks great, and well I can sure tell you that I feel a lot better after reading it. Great job really I now have a heart which is warm.
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KingGummy341 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2011
Beautiful...
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Arashi93-sama Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011
Wow ,that was a quite well theory?yeah!really awesome,dude!
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Benstudios Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
... This.


It's legitimate. Probably gonna end up as canon...
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DestinyDecade Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. Awesome. So detailed.
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mortalshinobi Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011
very nicely done. it has a good message to it.
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ZephyrFiction Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011
I keep throwing my money at the screen...

There is so much in this comic right now, you don't even know.

You just boiled down the key essences of this fandom, added some diced Wild Mass Guessing, hit the 'crushed ice' button, then fed the resulting gel to a little puppy whom you then tucked into bed with a glass of warm milk, a hand-stitched quilt, and a teddy bear you bought at a Salvation Army thrift store.

You see where I'm going with this?
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CrunchNugget Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011
I see you going up the list of my favorite comments.
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KannaTC Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
This is AMAZING WORK! Amazing story...
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Ashby10 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
Thank you a lot for this work
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JulezRulez77 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
how do u make this?
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CrunchNugget Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
Playing with Inkscape vectors for a very long time.
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snakefire41 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
most likely a pad or tab or something.
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Zaehlas Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I'm speechless. I doubt that whatever MLP:FiM put out on Christmas will match this.
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